For the last three to four days we have been doing
Waiting poems, so here's mine
When Me,
my Mum and my sister were
going to get groceries, I had a choice of going into the supermarket or staying
in the car, so I just picked stay to stay in the car and then I watched youtube on my phone.
Kia ora Quaid my name is Aoife I go to Grey Main school and I am a year 6 in Mamaku 2. I think that the poem was cool but I also think that you should add in more words to make the sentences make sense. What made you think of that poem? Bye.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Quaid my name is Elijah I go to Grey Main school and I am a year 6 in Mamaku 2. I think that the poem was cool but I also think that you should add in more words to make the sentences make sense. What made you think of that poem and what did you like most about doing this aktivaty.bye
Kia ora Quaid my name is Riley I go to Grey Main school and I'm in Mamaku 2. I think that the poem was cool. Maybe next time you could make it so it is all on one page.
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